In my point of veiw, i srongly belive that it is important for young people to have the ability to oragnize and plan to save time, money and to be successful, because modern life is very complex.
First of all, having organized steps to follow will protect people from wasting their valuable time doing unneccessary stuff. What i mean is that some people spend a lot of time being confused in what they should do. People who do plans always reach their goal faster than people who do not. For example, I remeber ten years ago when i was in college, i used to do a plan in the begining of the year of what i am going to do. i planned to take ten different subjects in the same semester, and to do that i needed firist to check what subjects that i am allowed to take on the same semester. Second to make a good schedual to allow me to take all of them and have time during each day to study too. Third I needed to quit my work to do that. Forth, I went to the university to assign for the classes. As a result of planning for that early, i had the chance to take ten subjects per semester and by following this plan, i had no troubles during the semester on my study plan. In addition, it saved me time cause of doing that i had a chance to graduate earlier a semester before my colleagues. Moreover, doing the plan saved me from choosing wrong subjects which can not be taken together in the same semester. Consequently,saved my time from doing the schedual many times to find the right match.
Seconed, it is alawys said oragnization is a habitat of being successful. What i mean is that almost successful people depend on making plans and being organized. For example, my dad always told me that he is successful because he used to make plans. He wanted to be attached for medical school when he was young and to do that he needed to have a high GPA. So, he did studid hard in high school and left his work as a plan to get high GPA. He used to do a plan week by week of what he is going to study, and by following this plan he reached his goal by having a GPA of 3,9. A s a result of that, he had the chance to attend medical shool and to Be successful. According to New York times, 97 percent of the successful people used to make plans and following it each day.
To conclude, having a plan and being organized is an attitude to do the right thing on the right time, plus reach your goal in a time manner as all successful people do.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'for example', 'i mean', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196911196911 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.22972972973 0.158761421928 145% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0733590733591 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.030888030888 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0656370656371 0.0685040099705 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108108108108 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0598455598456 0.0351676179071 170% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38172105918 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0675675675676 0.0309702414327 218% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0868725868726 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00579150579151 0.0209618222197 28% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0212355212355 0.0139019557991 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2438.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 474.0 408.028673835 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14345991561 5.86048508987 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.246835443038 0.338922669872 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.143459915612 0.251872472559 57% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.111814345992 0.174417080927 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0569620253165 0.112833075102 50% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38172105918 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426160337553 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.5195185823 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5454545455 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4674381998 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.818181818 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 35.8914461066 45.7405998639 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.11834319527 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385265097113 0.300154397459 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.167251399259 0.103427244359 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0802105748836 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503056238365 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.200072245122 0.151897553556 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155094666125 0.114077575197 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857315206427 0.0781384742642 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388889046604 0.336927656856 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0777873297438 0.067059652881 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315117993998 0.210909579961 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886180487776 0.0618886996521 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.