Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
In contrast to the reading passage, which emphasizes the relation between reward and performance positively, the lecture focuses on potential nd salary rather than on rewards. The professor disagree with the text about sysytem of reward to encourage employee.
The passage explains that behavior rewards are important aspect of management and to increase productivity. However, the professor says that people don't like encouragement, they want to be paid for their work. And there is no control study which states that productivity increases because of rewards. Instead of increase, rewards could be counter productive too.
The second point that the professor makes has to do with the subject matter of counter effect of rewards. According to text, Job performance and rewards are propotional to each other. However, the professor contradict this by saying that few employies thinks rewards are punishment. They thinks they are being controled or manupulated and off course they don't like being that. So this may lead to less productivity. Moreover, the more you desire for rewards and if you fail then more disappoinment you will be. Thus rewards can abate quality amount of work. Employee will tend to avoid ask question to superior who have authority of rewards, because employee thinks that will give negetive impact on their personality in front of superior. So thus it also reduces the performance.
Finally, in contrast to the reading passage's claim that rewards can help to persuade people to achieve remarkable results, the professor reminds that rewards can reduce productivity and performance.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. 73
- how to prepare youth for government,company? by cooperation or by competition? 16
- Childhood is the happiest time of a person s life 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...However, the professor says that people dont like encouragement, they want to be pai...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...ies thinks rewards are punishment. They thinks they are being controled or manupulated...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oled or manupulated and off course they dont like being that. So this may lead to le...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'as to', 'in contrast', 'in contrast to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254480286738 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.172043010753 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0645161290323 0.0866891130778 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0501792114695 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0358422939068 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132616487455 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0250896057348 0.0351676179071 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80881470291 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0465949820789 0.0309702414327 150% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716845878136 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286738351254 0.0209618222197 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143369175627 0.0139019557991 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1612.0 2387.08602151 68% => OK
No of words: 252.0 408.028673835 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.39682539683 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48200974243 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424603174603 0.338922669872 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.34126984127 0.251872472559 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.238095238095 0.174417080927 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146825396825 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80881470291 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 60.9066895801 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 15.75 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5983083786 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.876984127 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.59722222222 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150032839578 0.300154397459 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0677405386714 0.103427244359 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0531110765673 0.0752933317313 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479701285073 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.2067644369 0.151897553556 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666474655938 0.114077575197 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515730746774 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347389564187 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0926975865752 0.067059652881 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111697638039 0.210909579961 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350037644665 0.0618886996521 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.6433691756 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.