some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
Different countries have different cultures,customs,languages and practices.People visit various place to know about their culture,traditions and lifestyles.People visiting a country will be unaware about the customs and the believes of that country so the host country should welcome the cultural differences and treat them with courtesy and respect which can create a sense of unity among people of various believes.
At the same time when a person decides to visit a country he should make some study regarding the language,customs and lifestyles which can help him in avoiding difficulties in communication and cultural barriers.For example when an Indian national make a visit to America he should have some knowledge about the climate,geography and social life so that it would be easy for him.
On the other hand it is not mandatory for a visitor to follow the local customs and behaviour. Indians believe in traditional lifestyles and they have a different culture and most of them are the supporters of monogamy, but we cannot neglect the fact the the people in other country have their own perspective in terms of dress code, culture and behaviour. We should be ready to accept all cultures irrespective of caste,creed,sex and language bearing in mind that we uphold the principle unity in diversity.Changes and innovations happens when we accepts cultures of different countries without hesitation
To conclude the host country have the obligation to welcome the visitors of their country with a positive attitude and try to learn from the good things in them which will help our nation to become honoured with pride.
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- some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change.Others,however think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your opinion 56
- some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion 56
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27304964539 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.13475177305 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0957446808511 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0106382978723 0.0501214627716 21% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.063829787234 0.0437548338989 146% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117021276596 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0106382978723 0.0403226058552 26% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.44698650655 2.80594681477 123% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031914893617 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.109929078014 0.0861772015684 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0354609929078 0.021408717616 166% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212765957447 0.011925033212 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1880.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.23076923077 6.12580529183 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369230769231 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192307692308 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134615384615 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44698650655 2.80594681477 123% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.037074148 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 52.6817153859 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.7743622355 250% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 157.932137325 49.517814964 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 376.0 127.492653851 295% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.0 20.7743622355 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.814263465372 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.99599198397 501% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 82.0 49.1944974215 167% => OK
Elegance: 1.91525423729 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402455215994 0.332605444948 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.239632130644 0.102741220458 233% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0710379577112 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.819914708929 0.534860350844 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.206886658753 0.148594505496 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259485217233 0.134430193775 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553541899346 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315001358003 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0179628151724 0.0638462369009 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273218627905 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059427877976 0.058150111329 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.