Both reading and lectures are about the idea of assign the project to team member or just to only one person.
The reading introduces that to assign the project to group member that will be benificial to these member. All project stuff member will take the expeience,share the information and there will bw more creative idea. However the professor refutes this point by saying that there no benifiet to work in agroup becuase may be the highly creative peoole will be ignored by other group member. Besides he mentions that the group member need to meet severl times to build group member.
The reading mentions that there is no risk will attack any body through a group. the responsability will be like one resonsability for this team no personal responsability. On the other hand, the professor avers this idea and he explains that to work in member there is more risk and one or two people more efficient to manage becuse they will more responsable so there is no risk on them.
The reading explains that to take a decision by group member, there is no debates about this decison will be much better than single decision. the rewarding this team will be for the all team. Nevertheless, the professor avers this idea by saying, there will be less team recognation, becuse there is no name .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Both reading and lectures are about the ...
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...am member or just to only one person. The reading introduces that to assign th...
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Message: Did you mean 'this member' or 'these members'?
Suggestion: this member; these members
...group member that will be benificial to these member. All project stuff member will take th...
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...icial to these member. All project stuff member will take the expeience,share the...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , share
...ct stuff member will take the expeience,share the information and there will bw more ...
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...n and there will bw more creative idea. However the professor refutes this point by say...
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Suggestion: Besides,
... will be ignored by other group member. Besides he mentions that the group member need ...
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...et severl times to build group member. The reading mentions that there is no ri...
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...tions that there is no risk will attack any body through a group. the responsability wil...
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...k will attack any body through a group. the responsability will be like one resonsa...
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...hat to take a decision by group member, there is no debates about this decison will be much better ...
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...ll be much better than single decision. the rewarding this team will be for the all...
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...eam recognation, becuse there is no name .
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262295081967 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.131147540984 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655737704918 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0409836065574 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.016393442623 0.0685040099705 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.094262295082 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0122950819672 0.0351676179071 35% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54716993473 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0450819672131 0.0309702414327 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.147540983607 0.0887237588012 166% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0450819672131 0.0209618222197 215% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00819672131148 0.0139019557991 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1312.0 2387.08602151 55% => OK
No of words: 227.0 408.028673835 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77973568282 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.48200974243 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295154185022 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20704845815 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.114537444934 0.174417080927 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0704845814978 0.112833075102 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54716993473 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471365638767 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.7832381861 59.2087087015 71% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6363636364 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7492857085 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.272727273 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.54480286738 234% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.3412094513 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.95652173913 1.45489161554 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215361832345 0.300154397459 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.172071679429 0.103427244359 166% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0822999705024 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.673356143321 0.497263757937 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154012245545 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120882117672 0.114077575197 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385487093559 0.0781384742642 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.415804446085 0.336927656856 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0504193949237 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168472623114 0.210909579961 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233785568009 0.0618886996521 38% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.