Airline companies in many countries have reduced the cost of tickets. Discuss whether this is a positive or negative development. Give some examples based on your own experience.
Tendency to travel is increasing in the societies all around the world and one of the safest ways to travel is flying the airplains. However, cost of ticket is an important issue considered with travelers and airline companies. Many airline companies are trying to reduce their fares while some are of the opinion that such a development is not positive at all. This essay will discuss positive and negative aspect of cost reduction.
Airline companies will decrease the quality of their services if they want to reduce the cost of tickets. There are even some low-fare flights in which passengers have to pay for whatever they need during the flight. Airline companies, such as Ryanair in Europe, drastically have reduced the quality of their services in order to provide the customers with cheaper tickets. That is why many people are not satisfied with such a situation and they would like to pay more if they would receive better services.
On the other hand, number of travels will increase if people buy cheaper tickets. As a result, both airline companies and society would benefit from this development due to several reasons. Firstly, many tourist would visit different places in the world and this phenomenon is beneficial to countries with attractions, in terms of economy. From another aspect, travelers also get more experience and insight when they visit new things that have not been aware of them before. Secondly, the level of stress would be decreased in societies in which people have fruitful leisure time. Thirdly, in this kind of societies, children grow in more suitable environment and it is beneficial to the next generation. Meanwhile, children grown up in an environment with lower level of stress will be better parents later.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that from different aspects, it is beneficial to both companies and individuals if ticket prices drop so that people would be able to travel more. Hence, governments should seriously think of the ways to provide the society with cheaper flights.
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Suggestion:
...ovide the society with cheaper flights.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'even so', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258855585831 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.138964577657 0.155533422707 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0871934604905 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0435967302452 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0326975476839 0.0437548338989 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141689373297 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0217983651226 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61192494665 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354223433243 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00272479564033 0.00163938923432 166% => OK
Determiners: 0.0899182561308 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0299727520436 0.021408717616 140% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016348773842 0.011925033212 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2039.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08656716418 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388059701493 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30447761194 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202985074627 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128358208955 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61192494665 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519402985075 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.4587546909 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7058823529 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9928864139 49.517814964 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.941176471 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05882352941 0.814263465372 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.153643547 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.96202531646 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325805830304 0.332605444948 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0929662051799 0.102741220458 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0483989688989 0.0668466124924 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501763751132 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126200830307 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130872948989 0.134430193775 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612380243573 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.386633510326 0.324371583561 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0159606363382 0.0638462369009 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217701006659 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823152283636 0.058150111329 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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