A/D? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
The increasingly developments in different aspect of life bring both positive and negative consequences for the modern societies. However, the political behavior of the governors become more and more complicated, a plethora of people is in the conviction that juveniles can play critical role to formation their future community. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that the destiny of the societies, had been identified previously, and people cannot have any important effect in this regard. I am of the opinion that, young people enable to lead their destiny in their favorable way, and the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, rapid changes and complexity of today's world has been guided by the youths. Undoubtedly, recent technologies are accounted as an integral part of current societies; therefore, the question is how these technologies have been made? Admittedly, young people are inseparable segment of a crowd that lead these progressive technologies. As a result, no one can overlook the crucial impact that they can make to shape the future. Besides, knowledge is another factor that can change the whole equality. In the past, there were not many people that have abundant knowledge about various facet of life, but we live in the era of time that the public, especially the young people, gets remarkably awareness. In this circumstance, people do not wait till others make decisions for their future as they intend to take steps in order to fulfill their requirements.
Another vital fact that should be taken into consideration is that governments have tendency toward establishing democracy in their own countries. They understood that the time of dictator got over long time ago; consequently, seemingly they urge their people to get involve in their decisions. That is why many free elections have been presented due to varied purposes. The last year election for Scotland and Great Britain is a good example of this topic, which shows even powerful governments tend that all the group of people should be engaged in determination of their future. In this regard, young people are extremely precious for the governments as they are aware of this fact that this age category control the society; subsequently their satisfaction guarantee their present, and controversy, any contention can push them to the irrecoverable implication.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that juveniles have highlight role in their future thanks to their incredible knowledge. Also, government has concluded that they cannot manage their countries, unless open up the doors for their people to participation in taking important decisions.
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- TPO 27 integrated writing : Little Ice Age 90
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239085239085 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0977130977131 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045738045738 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0519750519751 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12474012474 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.04158004158 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92444582817 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.022869022869 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10395010395 0.0887237588012 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02079002079 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016632016632 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2747.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 432.0 408.028673835 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.3587962963 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37962962963 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289351851852 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.226851851852 0.174417080927 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.178240740741 0.112833075102 158% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92444582817 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571759259259 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 68.8632418044 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.208981773 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.611111111 120.699889404 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 52.9351851852 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.61157024793 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430486069749 0.300154397459 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101523570735 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597607095787 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526197625537 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153608985998 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173943381499 0.114077575197 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692313108329 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.484792846044 0.336927656856 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0491988376895 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316998820688 0.210909579961 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525627409629 0.0618886996521 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.