Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Modern transportation is playing a crucial role and is an important section of a society. An increasing number of people are using transportation opportunities which provides a great number of facilities and every society-individuals, families, communities, and businesses benefit from modern transportation. Meanwhile, some others contradict by saying, it will cause accidents, air pollution. After all, people will lose their life in accidents and major illness are because of air pollution. I refute this by noting that, modern transportation has massive advantages as enhance of personal life, transportation of goods, and trade with foreign countries.
I believe that, modern technology enhanced personal life of public. Individual benefit from public transportation, use it in many cases while going to school, to work, and visiting a friends. In fact everyone is free and can walk anywhere. What's more, people can travel long distances just in few hours using plane, train or ship which will save time, more secure. For instance, in early times to travel a long distance would take much time even months but in today's world, modern transportation provide wide range of facilities that people can travel same distance just in few hours.
Furthermore, transporting goods and other materials from one part of the country to another. It would make possible, transport of goods, fruits and other products to the market on time. Take for example, different types of fruits should be reached to the market fresh using public transportation. On the other hand, without using transportation it is not possible to convey on time to the market. As a consequence, in absence of transportation companies would not be possible to transport goods and other products on time.
Finally, Trade with foreign countries become possible because of the fast and reliable means of air, road and water transport. That's is, to buy and sell goods, and have good economic relations with other countries of the world. Indeed, it will grow country economy. I elaborate on this by explaining, the economic relations between the United States of America with other European countries, USA import many things as per their need from other countries and export many products which they produce using modern transportation. As a result it cause grow of country economy and relations with other nations.
In all, Modern transportation is the key of contemporary world development in all sections especially grow of economy. In my point of view, we should work on more advance transport technologies. As mentioned, it will enhance people life and improve foreign relations between all countries of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
... going to school, to work, and visiting a friends. In fact everyone is free and can walk ...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...everyone is free and can walk anywhere. Whats more, people can travel long distances ...
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Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...means of air, road and water transport. Thats is, to buy and sell goods, and have goo...
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Line 6, column 397, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (USA) must be used with a third-person verb: 'imports'.
Suggestion: imports
...rica with other European countries, USA import many things as per their need from othe...
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Line 6, column 543, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...g modern transportation. As a result it cause grow of country economy and relations w...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'after all', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'in many cases', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286307053942 0.229887763892 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.124481327801 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114107883817 0.0866891130778 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0248962655602 0.046263068375 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0311203319502 0.0685040099705 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143153526971 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0311203319502 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06691932173 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0207468879668 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0601659751037 0.0887237588012 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0269709543568 0.0209618222197 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00622406639004 0.0139019557991 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2686.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 424.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33490566038 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39858490566 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290094339623 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207547169811 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143867924528 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06691932173 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.755538587 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4347826087 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9582351404 48.84282405 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.782608696 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4347826087 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 47.444216571 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.55172413793 1.45489161554 175% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252994890221 0.300154397459 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142876843859 0.103427244359 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105571934197 0.0752933317313 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524570002968 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149897804506 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953016211035 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589128517876 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283742611578 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.066389199155 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163104293285 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264767611363 0.0618886996521 43% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.