Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Infants from the beginning of their life need healthy and nutrient food which our creature denotes milk to mothers to nurture their infant. Food is a mandatory and basic need of life and it is important to choose healthy and nutrient foods to eat in every day meals. Nowadays development in many aspects of life styles make it easier to prepare foods quickly. We can also prepare fresh and healthy food and have great variety of foods.
Today’s development made it easier to prepare foods quicker. In all around world human invented many devices that is specially designed for cooking and making foods. One common example is a microwave, with the use of this device people can cook and warm up quickly by pushing some bottoms. Another example is an ice cream maker which is easier to operate with uneducated person. Because of invention of these devices ones could prepare foods faster than before. Consequently, people will spend more times with their families and have fun times.
With the transportation goods to all round world and using refrigerators , we can purchase and eat fresh foods such as vegetables and fruits that is native to the specific region. Therefore our physical body will be healthy and also with use of healthy foods we will live better.
When we eat different foods we might feel happy about life. People could serve different kind of foods from wide variety of nationality such as native foods from Australia and china to America and other countries. Moreover serving these great and colorful foods in your home city will be joyful.
In conclusion, preparation time for foods will be beneficial and important. People are challenging in the world for the sake of spending less time in preparation foods and this will be continued.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sier to operate with uneducated person. Because of invention of these devices ones coul...
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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...e of healthy foods we will live better. When we eat different foods we might feel ha...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276397515528 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.139751552795 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11801242236 0.0866891130778 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0310559006211 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111801242236 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0248447204969 0.0351676179071 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50836176502 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310559006211 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00310559006211 0.00188951952338 164% => OK
Determiners: 0.055900621118 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0403726708075 0.0209618222197 193% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0155279503106 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1763.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 298.0 408.028673835 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91610738255 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328859060403 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258389261745 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144295302013 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0906040268456 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50836176502 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540268456376 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 55.51617078 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5294117647 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.082829652 48.84282405 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.705882353 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.644075263715 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 43.3683379392 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.92753623188 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225912680393 0.300154397459 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118412467852 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109518350887 0.0752933317313 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543905993626 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171541526902 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889977193566 0.114077575197 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522162046597 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299201165494 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0342548724666 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142342429839 0.210909579961 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509044235896 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.