Nations should suspend govt. funding for
the arts when significant numbers of their
citizens are hungry and unemployed.
The author in the above issue talks about suspending government
funding for arts for the welfare of the hungry and unemployment.
Accordingly, I persist on being of the opinion that mere suspension for
funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens.
There are multiple reason for my agreement with this view. I shall
endeavour my perceptions for the above paragraph.
Firstly, The above statement indicates that we should stop funding for
the arts with consideration to the welfare of the citizens. But as the
above statement suggest, We cannot take it for the granted that
there will be hike in the number of the employment and hungry.
However, A specific survey must be carried out for the funding in arts
thereby taking this brutal step.
Secondly, As Tourism plays a vital role in the nation economy. If we
stop funding of the arts the tourism will also be get effected thereby
resulting into the lack of symmetry in national income. An appropriate
survey of the dependence on the tourism must be made to make an
decession. Art tend to be the beauty of any nation, being the real gem.
Relinquishing them may bring an end to the Indian culture. Also,
funding fails to give an assurance regarding the welfare of people
Thirdly, Government should carry out a specific survey for the
investment done on different resources of art to that of the result
obtain due to this. Yet additional investment would not play a major
role in contribution. However, the government should stop funding for
by such resources the national income would be saved. Eventually,
Development of the Nation lies in the development of the Art. So It
may give a major effect for the welfare of the nation. But on this
assumption, We cannot risk for the nation.
Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, consolidating all the
perspectives in one, I would like to say that all the decision should be
taken by government to fight the national problems have to be very
careful and must be conscious only after observing all the thing in one,
all the aftereffects of what will be there after decision. And As they
suggest, abandoning of arts funding should be considered as the last
option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Funding
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Suggestion: Funding
...the opinion that mere suspension for funding for arts will not be best option for we...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...ension for funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. ...
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Suggestion: Endeavour
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: Thereby
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ays a vital role in the nation economy. If we stop funding of the arts the tour...
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Suggestion: Resulting
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Suggestion: Decession
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...e government should stop funding for by such resources the national income woul...
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Suggestion: May
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Suggestion: Assumption
...e welfare of the nation. But on this assumption, We cannot risk for the nation. Thus...
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...nation. Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, consolidating all the perspe...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
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Suggestion: Option
...ing should be considered as the last option.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224096385542 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.139759036145 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0674698795181 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0457831325301 0.0497285424764 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0313253012048 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151807228916 0.12292977631 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0506024096386 0.0406280797675 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72847272702 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0265060240964 0.030933414821 86% => OK
Particles: 0.00240963855422 0.0016655270985 145% => OK
Determiners: 0.13734939759 0.0997080785238 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0481927710843 0.0249443105267 193% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00481927710843 0.0148568991511 32% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2277.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 378.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02380952381 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322751322751 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251322751323 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171957671958 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124338624339 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72847272702 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 219.290929204 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470899470899 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 49.678355173 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4667366442 59.4972553346 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.85 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.674092028746 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.94800884956 667% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.0322751323 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.96666666667 1.64882698954 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111379764206 0.391690518653 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1258415676 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0711824303485 0.077325440228 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.780269459648 0.547984918172 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.291405355682 0.149214159877 195% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557262612548 0.161403998019 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471073568165 0.0892212321368 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.141212063321 0.385218514788 37% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0817181803443 0.0692045440612 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493838481436 0.275328986314 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501918346685 0.0653680567796 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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