Every individual has its own way of living a life and to achieve their dreams. But is it necessary to be able to plan and organize things to live a successful life or is it fine to live it casually without thinking about the future? Many people think that it is very intricate to plan things beforehand and to follow them. However, in my opinion, it is mandatory to do so for the following reasons that I will discuss further in my essay.
To begin with, it is easier and the quickest way to get desirable results in life. When a person plans, she/he not only knows what are the things that will be required to attain a goal but it also enables him/her to keep time for everything and do justice with everything. For example my son wants to be in the state team of cricket but at the same time his studies were also important. So, he did planning, according to which he divided time for his studies, practice and sleep. This made his vision more clear. In fact he was more focused and did not waste time anywhere else. This organization made him achieve his goal in less time without compromising on his studies. This would not have been possible without proper planning.
In addition, this also makes a person more responsible and dedicated towards work. If a young student has planned things and is implementing his ideas to get what he/she wants then that student tends to become more focused and diligent and these are the qualities that are needed in today’s modern world to achieve success. There is tough competition in every field, people who are not capable of planning cannot sustain. I can recall that one of my colleagues had carefree attitude. When he was given a significant project to handle solely, he did not do required planning. In the end, he could not finish that project in the given time frame due to which company had to bear huge lose and he was extricated. Hence, it is essential to make a schedule and follow it religiously.
To recapitulate, I will assert that though there could be many people who will persuade one to do things without planning as it is quite easy but people who have attained great heights in life will always recommend doing the right thing which is to be organized because it teaches one to be disciplined and responsible. Without these virtues, it is nearly impossible to get success in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'plan'
Suggestion: plan
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly impossible to get success in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, as to, for example, in addition, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57547169811 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5297931043 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507075471698 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.025179008 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.380952381 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154013297747 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044679299523 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406756759893 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100340597005 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309128399983 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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