Each and every activity human beings do, connected to motorways in one way or the other. However, motorways are not safe always. This essay examine the problems of motorways as well as some suggestions to improve those conditions.
To begin with, the first and foremost tragedy happens in motorways are accidents. Although, motorways improved human life in earth in many ways , the number of deaths in road accidents soaring day by day. We can blame lack of attention for these deaths but, this is not the real cause. Narrowed and poorly maintained roads are the culprits of the deaths happening on the road. Another important point is over speed, nowadays, youngsters do not respect any speed limits which is advised by road traffic control department. Auto mobile companies made super cars and bikes which have more power and speed but our roads are not improved so far. Finally, lack of respect between drivers on the road, the poor condition of road and traffic jams make the people crazy. They shout each other if any mistakes occur.There is no compassion and mutual respect between individuals when they are on road, everyone wants to reach their destination as soon as possible. In this rat race there is no room for humanitarian values and compassion.
However, there are some possible solution for these problems. Government has to take the initiative to repair the roads because citizens are paying a huge amount of money as road tax. Government should make sure that this amount spent wisely and fruitfully. Secondly,though we have good laws about speed limit it has not been enforced yet. Authorities must make sure that speed limit violators penalized accordingly. The last but not least, attitude towards our brothers and sisters . in this case , nobody can do anything expect individuals, everyone should make effort to behave properly on roads
Even though there are problems on road, we can easily tackle these problems with the above mentioned solutions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08615384615 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57745676741 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612307692308 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.502482112 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102558959638 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035514175919 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425232489438 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082360809167 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502030798642 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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