Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
The life situation adapted to the time that people live in. I think it is true to claim that life becomes easier and more comfortable in comparison with the past because of some reasons that I will mention.
Firstly, the improvement of the medicine situation in a modern life. The majority of the people died with light diseases. In fact, the lack of the knowledge and requirements drug let the diseases overwhelmed people. Also, another example of the absence of medicine science is dying of baby when they were born. On the contrary, today by the development of science and discovering of new and useful drug the number of the people that die from diseases reduces. So, the first difference of modern life is the advancement of the health situation of people.
Secondly, the emergence of technology is one of the unique altered. Nowadays, the people lives completely depend on the technology such as cars, televisions, the internet, and the others. Each of them eases one part of humans’ lives. For example, the car assists the people to transfer so easily, or the internet makes the connection so easier. So, the technology makes a modern life completely unlike from the past because it reduces the problems such as transformation, connection, and the others that are a vital part of people's daily lives.
Finally, increases the job opportunity. By enhancement of education, the people’s knowledge and skills develop. Originally, these two cases are vital for finding a job. The most important part is, arising a new job such engineering or psychology and the others. So, by the development of people’s knowledge, the job occasion increases.
In conclusion, the new invention and detection are the obvious arguments to prove this claim that new and modern life totally changes and make more uncomplicated and convenience.
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- tpo 27 80
- Do you agree that people easily learn from the friends beside them Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer 30
- It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. 65
- People learn easily from the friends beside them. 60
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 20, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...casion increases. In conclusion, the new invention and detection are the obvious arguments...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11920529801 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95893120763 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4780168607 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3684210526 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120889851968 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032564299824 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439635370329 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073148984044 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586376539328 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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