Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people consider that there should be changeless type of penalization for each type of criminal offenders. Others, however, debate that taking into consideration all the circumstances and reasons for committing the crime when determining the punishment would be more fair judgement.
First of all, some people believe that there must be constant punishment for every lawbreaker in order to never attempt to commit regardless of the crime’s motive. In particular, every citizen would be aware of its severe effects. For instance, In Saudi Arabia robbery is a rare occasion due to fingers of offender being cut that is not significant whether victim is a car or apple.
Additionally, having fixed penalization would definitely diminish the rate of transgression dramatically. As long as individuals cognize about severe consequences of felony, they might be deterred of perpetrating the crime. In short, there would be fewer concerns from being victim and threat of possession as well as the value of freedom would be a greater extent.
Secondly, there should be a more humane system in the trial, whether criminal offence was committed by violence or under compulsion. To be more specific, transgression was done for feeding a family or stealing for profit. Therefore, in the court, all of the details and circumstances of crime should be investigated as well as motivation should be taken into consideration before sentencing a criminal. Furthermore, there are some people who need to nourish their hungry offsprings or someone who must pay for treatment which their households receive and such situations in which the crime has not been done deliberately as the vital needs.
Having inspected both aspects, it appears me that the motivation for perpetrating the transgression must be taken into account and calling the adequate penalization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 247, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in particular, in short, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38487972509 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11092047388 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5410436853 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.538461538 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494383795677 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166859582977 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948076605539 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270128814525 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110685422634 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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