The map compares two proposed sites for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.
Overall, S1 is the suitable site for shopping mall as there is different modes of transport and a housing estate beside it.
The first proposed site call S1 is at the north side of the city surrounded by rail,road and water transports around it. There is a housing estate also beside it so that it is the ideal site for a shopping mall because of the availability of the various modes transportation and a housing estate near to it. The people who live in the housing estate have only a walking distance to this site.
ON the other hand the second proposed site situates at the extreme south. Although rail and road transportation are available here, there is no residential area beside it. People have to travel a lot in order to reach here. Hence, S1 is the ideal site for shopping mall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are different modes'?
Suggestion: there are different modes
... the suitable site for shopping mall as there is different modes of transport and a housing estate besid...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsport and a housing estate beside it. The first proposed site call S1 is at th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , road
...orth side of the city surrounded by rail,road and water transports around it. There i...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'modes'' or 'mode's'?
Suggestion: modes'; mode's
...ause of the availability of the various modes transportation and a housing estate nea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55063291139 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59682703609 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5511413123 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8888888889 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174928447586 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928926935684 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827164609501 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150441457668 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828760821969 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.