Do you spend money or save?
Money is internal part of our life. Nowadays almost all people working to earn money .All inhabitants getting money by working but they are using money differently. Some of them save money in banks while others waste it for amusement or enjoying ,shopping ,traveling. In my opinion is better to save money than spend it for something. I know a lot of reasons why I choose this way better and in the following essay I will explore ıt.
First of all, we never can not aware what would be in the future. Maybe will be surprising news or will be worst day waiting us in the future .Cause of it ,now I m saving my money for rainy days. Rainy days will be different.An example I will ill or I will lost my telephone, maybe my parents will ask for me some money. I have experienced this kind of situation in my life.2 years ago I win 20000 soms in one competition and I saved it in my bank account,after 2 weeks later my dad became ill,then I used my honor for my dads injuctions .
Like this example to save money for rainy days is usefull than spend it immediately.
Second reason is that to save money in bank is best way to collect them and open new business .As Robert Kiosaki said In this life you must not work for the money likewise you must do something in order to money works for you. How we can do this. By (enterpenioring )we can do this, But firstly we should earn money and save it and invest it for new business .An example my uncle worked in Dubai almost 3 years and he never waste his money for amusement or something,in the contrary he picked up his money and after 3 years later he stared for new (enter).Now he can use his money for all thing what he want.
Conclusionly by saving money we can be prepared for future situation as I said above and we can affort for as after collecting money and opening new business
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, may, second, so, then, while, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2795389049 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42781062562 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510086455331 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.0545626629 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335543677892 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136519633225 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103435088189 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209751255086 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877541975894 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 10.9000537634 72% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.