Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Currently, it is evident that there is an enormous extravagant waste which is done by humanity. It is highly debatable to tackle this issue. Some critics argue that it is useless to solve this problem if authorities do not make it legal. However, I do not agree with this statement for several reason. They will be given as follows
Firstly, living in pure and neat environment depends on personality of individuals indeed, which means that, it is possible to organise recycling system without validity. In most developed countries, to take an example, albeit there is no tax or sentence for...
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Comments
This essay goes with too many
This essay goes with too many grammatical errors. Also the I cannot see a clear and reasonable logic of the author. In real IELTS test, I think this essay cannot be rated higher than band 5.5, maybe band 5 or even lower.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Currently, it is evident that there is a...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
... I do not agree with this statement for several reason. They will be given as follows Fi...
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...eason. They will be given as follows Firstly, living in pure and neat environ...
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...ming and pollution can be prevented. Secondly, it is clearly illustrated by t...
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... recycling and its immense benefits. To sum up, it is apperant from the fore...
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...g and its immense benefits. To sum up, it is apperant from the foregoing po...
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... apperant from the foregoing points that governments should encourage and warn th...
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...urage and warn the public by advertising
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in the same way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221453287197 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.19723183391 0.155533422707 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0795847750865 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0346020761246 0.0501214627716 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0449826989619 0.0437548338989 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110726643599 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0553633217993 0.0403226058552 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9124519678 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0484429065744 0.0326793684256 148% => OK
Particles: 0.00692041522491 0.00163938923432 422% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0726643598616 0.0861772015684 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0173010380623 0.021408717616 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103806228374 0.011925033212 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1559.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 316.048096192 80% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13779527559 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374015748031 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307086614173 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212598425197 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157480314961 0.137316102897 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9124519678 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677165354331 0.56093040696 121% => OK
Word variations: 81.3902800093 60.7387585426 134% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5384615385 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8949507815 49.517814964 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.2471229558 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.4 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476586760937 0.332605444948 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102438735853 0.102741220458 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0565378871029 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530659199648 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199684901649 0.148594505496 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189006853119 0.134430193775 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817349227881 0.0742795772207 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.336837252281 0.324371583561 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0775922914917 0.0638462369009 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308196994009 0.228012699653 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397319374488 0.058150111329 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9