Communities are made from group of people living together. Some people argue that young are giving scare time to their communities. I, personally, disagree with the given statement due to various reasons.
In today's world, it is inevitable that number of youth club and participation of youth in club have drastically increased. In Nepal, according to report published in 2016, reveals that there are emergence to new club in recent years such as Axis Club, Buddha club. Also, it elicit that the participant are drastically increased in recent years.The main function of these clubs are to provide help to the communities ,so people can run their life with ease. Taking the example of youth club, Axis club basically provides help to the elder member of community, run any program during any occasion, and cleaning and sanitation activities conducted by municipality or village development community.
Furthermore, Emergence on new international scout, red-cross has also encouraged youth to take part in community activities. I, for instance, was also a member of scout during my school days. Similarly, my little brother and cousin are involved in scout now. Moreover, there is also increase in recruitment of youth in Red-cross. An information provided by Nepal Kathmandu post. Like a local club, these agencies are also involved in community participation and their involvement are higher than previous period.
However, some may argue that youths, in Today, are basically isolated, busy in study or social media, but I still insist that youth participation have not decreased. We know that today, there are various online clubs or agencies such as U.N online volunteering or Save Nepal. Some people may suppose that they are involved in their private stuff, but youth are basically providing hands in these online web-sites, which is an indirect involvement in community activities.
Finally, due to aforementioned grounds- emergence of local club and international club and organization, involvement of youth in online volunteering, youth, I believe, are participating,in present days, at social and community activities in higher rate than previous period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45697329377 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.016025257 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1653738695 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.176470588 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.073281758347 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326066837318 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591408854565 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593574640813 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814209682115 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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