Money is the key to happiness, without money we are nothing. Do you agree with this opinion?
Money, the sole currency in trading, is playing a crucial role which heavily influences every aspect of our life. However, going so far as claiming we cannot achieve happiness without sufficient amount of money is just plain exaggeration. Having too much money can be more of a plague than a boom.
On the one hand, money can provide a comfortable life which for some can be translated to happiness. Obviously, money represents spending power and they definitely have proportional relationship. Having higher spending power means more financial secured life thus frees us from any constraint from f...
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Essay evaluation report
we cannot achieve happiness without sufficient amount of money is just plain exaggeration. //two verbs
'we cannot achieve happiness without sufficient amount of money' is just a plain exaggeration.
money represents spending power
money represents a/the spending power
In additionally, having excess money heighten quality of life.
In addition, having excess money heightens the quality of life.
... who driven by greed, murdered their rich parents for inheritance.
... who was driven by greed, murdered their rich parents for inheritance.
... driven by greed, murdered their rich parents for inheritance.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 318 350
No. of Characters: 1642 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.223 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.164 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.824 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.737 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.854 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.48 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31761006289 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92037474709 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9335770698 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227629548797 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753194447852 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520552853034 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136910683229 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472193755987 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.