You are a student who wants to apply to green pines college. you are experiencing financial problems at the moment.
Write a letter to the principal of the college explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.
I am writing this letter to know more information on the grants and concession available toward undergraduate fee for international student at Green Pines College. First of all, I am a sophomore student and I would like to apply for an undergraduate degree at green pines but because of financial crisis I am unable to do so as of now.
Secondly, I would really appreciate if you can take time out of your busy schedule and share the valuable information on types of scholarships available at university and how to acquire funds from other different sources as well because it would allow me to go ahead with my application at Green Pines College.
Finally, I would be glad if you can either drop me an email with a compiled list of scholarships being offered at the university or international scholarships for students throughout the United States of America.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully
FaizalReza
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- is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person’s life. How far do you agree with this view? 56
- In many countries old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten especially by younger people Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably or is it something which we should try to prevent 58
- Things like puzzles board games and pictures can contribute to a child s development What would you give a child to help him her develop and why Give details and examples in your explanation 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14743589744 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42767745205 2.54303337028 135% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.9739548002 44.8134815571 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 76.5299724578 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 4.34317383033 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295103455284 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1318536072 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512074201685 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151284456061 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578733094239 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 8.37731958763 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.