Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
"For many years, museums have been considered as attractive places for many tourists. Nowadays, significant arguments have been addressed regarding the entry fee for these sites. In my opinion, I contend that museum visitors should be charged, since money is a vital tool for their persistence for several reasons.
First of all, museums are non- productive. In other words, museums are not like the factories which can produce various goods and sell it to make a profit. Accordingly, implementing a fee, even a nominal one, is necessary for the maintenance of these touristic buildings. A salient example is the Egyptian national museum, which has been closed because there was no available fund to run it.
Furthermore, incentives from selling the tickets provide additional resources to the country’s budget. It is well known that many countries depend mainly on tourism to flourish their economy. For instance, Thailand where an extravagant number of tourists travel to visit its museum, interestingly, the main contributor to its budget comes from selling museum tickets.
Nevertheless, applying such fees may be discouraging for many. That is because some might find it unappealing and costly to go to a museum and watch stony antiques. Although this may be a fact, I believe that this attitude is not so common. Moreover, those non-interested might damage these sites if they visited them without any payment, as they would not appreciate their value.
In conclusion, payment to visit museums is crucial for development and refurbishment of these valuable sites. In my opinion, the benefits of applying a fee, even a small one, would be great if it was generalized."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2936802974 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04260956222 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64312267658 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3515212757 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222044530508 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725552578679 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589837879958 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122369686435 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057116631361 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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