You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/ her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
Good day! I Maria Judith Parayno, got a new job in your company as a Manager, and about to start my work next week on the exact date of March 25th of 2017. I write this letter because I will not be able to start my job as a manager on your company.
I know that I gone through all hardships in finding a job that suits to my profession and luckily with all of those hardships I got hired as a manager on one of the best and leading company in our country and that is your respective company. Now that I am already a certified employee of your company I do have some problems that I need to resolve first. Suddenly, our house got burned, so I and my family must rent a temporary house for a month. While we are still renovating and working on our own house. In addition, I need some enough time to prepare and help my family to move our things. I really do apologize for this inconvenient but after I resolved this problem, I think I can start my work on the date of April 1st of 2017.
Hoping for your kind consideration for rescheduling my start date on your company. Thank you.
Respectfully yours,
Maria Judith Parayno
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my job as a manager on your company. I know that I gone through all hardships ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27064220183 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46816699785 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2205313551 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250216737546 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100968173893 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980336124504 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213851407594 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884272675789 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.