You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Sir,
Blessed day! I am Maria Judith Parayno, a 3rd year student of Our lady of Fatima, taking Bachelor of Science in Pharmacy. I wrote this letter because I borrowed some books in our library and I am not able to return the books in time.
As I said earlier, I cannot return the books that I just borrowed which is Pharmacology 2, Physical Pharmacy 3 and the Philosophy book 2. Due to one of our family member is not on a good condition, to be specific my grandfather is sick and our family here in the Philippines needs to visit him as soon as possible. Our flight will be on March 30th of 2017 going to California, USA. We need to stay there for a week, but we will be back here in the Philippines on April 6th of 2017. The books must be returned at the exact date of April 2nd of 2017, and because of this emergency. I am not able to return it at the night time. So, I wrote this letter to ask mote time or to extend the due date of returning those books until 7th of April 2017.
Hoping that you will consider this letter. Thank you for your kindness.
Sincerely yours,
Maria Judith Parayno
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Blessed day! I am Maria Judith Parayno, ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2441314554 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34890093994 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568075117371 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8274469494 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195093738188 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796496502692 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695202994831 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113718203816 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722114366813 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.