You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing this letter to bring a few inconveniences, which we faced when we dined at your restaurant yesterday, to your notice. We chose the Indira Nagar branch of your chain of hotels to celebrate the first brithday of my daughter. However, it turned out to be a nightmare, because of many faults of the staff of the hotel.
Foremost, we ordered afternoon lunch for about twenty people, but we were provided food for only fifteen members. Moreover, the quality and taste of the rice used was not up to the expectation. Adding to this, sweets, which were promised, were not severed. Furthermore, the staff were rude, when we questioned those improper arrangements.
On the whole, this bad experience has left us dumbstruck and greatly disappointed. Hence, we request you to take appropriate action against the people in charge of the branch. It would be even better, if you could provide us a compensation either as a discount on the bill or as vouchers.
I am looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Janani.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94972067039 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84774858138 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692737430168 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3930061213 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154834612937 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491415656435 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408804382996 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761674403785 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244221068062 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.