Dear sir
I am Rose Marry who visit your store every month and I was also the winner of last month bumper prize. Though your store has a good reputation for the services provided for the customers. But I would like to bring it to your notice the inconvenience faced by me today, as usual I was on my way to get the stuff I did not notice the floor was wet and I accidentally fell on the tomato tray which was on the other side. It made the whole place to ruin up.
Instead of helping me your staff were very furious for the loss rather then my ankle which was bleeding due to the mishap.
I cannot believe they asked me to pay for the tray.
With much disappointment I left the store.Henceforth I kindly request you to ask your staff to deal with the customers in a polite convenient way as to maintain the prestige of your store. On the other hand make sure that there will be sigh boards if any working is going on so this will avoid any such accidents to happen in future.
I hope you will take some sort of action and thanks for your consideration.
Your faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir I am Rose Marry who visit your store every month and I was a...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...was on my way to get the stuff I did not notice the floor was wet and I accidenta...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ice the floor was wet and I accidentally fell on the tomato tray which was on the...
^^
Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...f were very furious for the loss rather then my ankle which was bleeding due to the...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her then my ankle which was bleeding due to the mishap. I cannot believe they as...
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Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mishap. I cannot believe they asked me to pay for the tray. With much disapp...
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Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Henceforth
...th much disappointment I left the store.Henceforth I kindly request you to ask your staff ...
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Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Henceforth,
...th much disappointment I left the store.Henceforth I kindly request you to ask your staff ...
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Line 8, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igh boards if any working is going on so this will avoid any such accidents to ha...
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Line 8, column 325, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...will avoid any such accidents to happen in future. I hope you will take some sort of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, as to, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28019323671 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44595244772 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632850241546 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9209668262 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849444258314 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341861291447 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308088098992 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468965890404 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335147374485 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.