The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
Every living one on the earth has its rights. The topic animal have rights and are zoos helping the animals or not is a debatable one and each side has its logical arguments. I staunchly believe that zoos are causing discomfort to the animals.
There are some analysts, who hold the opinion that zoos are helping animals to live in the safe environment. They may argue that zoos are also a source of entertainment and information for humans as we can watch multiple species under one roof. For example, we can see different mammals, reptiles and bird species in zoos. So, zoos can not be banned because of its beneficiary reasons.
However, in spite of these arguments, there are various factors which affirm that the zoo causes harm to animals and they should not be kept in cages as we do at zoos.Firstly, some argue that the natural reserves are more batter for the animals. At these reserves, animals are free to roam according to their will rather than in cages. For example, the natural parks have wide area than the zoos and provide exact natural climate conditions for animals to live. Furthermore, animals who are living in their natural environment have batter chances to breed.
To conclude, we can say that animals have rights also and it is our moral duty to take care of these rights. So, I personally opine that animals should not be kept in zoos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...d not be kept in cages as we do at zoos.Firstly, some argue that the natural reserves a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44210746874 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.325123152709 308% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9623693204 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0769230769 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279848477287 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107269336509 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753068409371 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183768950622 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322346423801 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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