The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the animal rights, which is ongoing debate since 1970s, can lead to thought-provoking discussions. my opinion is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, zoo has two opposite results on the animal lives; however, I agree to keep it but with better arrangement.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, zoo provides a safe place, and it helps some certain species from other carnivore ones. it is important to note that when we segregate animals with its peers in different cages, that helps to maintain their life safely avoiding other animals attacks. Therefore, the aforementioned argument shows that zoos play a significant role in some animals’ species from being extinct.
As every coin has two sides, we note that carnivore species lose its nature in the caves, and it gets affected by being always in one place First and foremost, lions lose its nature skills for hunting and may become regularly sick, when they do not hunt and run after their preys This exemplifies that sometimes zoos have deteriorated signs on animals.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that even if there are some negative results from the zoos, we cannot deny its associated benefits, and it should not be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00823045267 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78561005233 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8892973847 50.4703680194 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.125 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.9669160288 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227703890003 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904613367303 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531863355638 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11726964685 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572163440454 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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