Animals have the rights to live and move freely like humans in their own habitable environment. Some people think that zoos are helping animals by providing them shelter, while other people hold a contradictory view that zoos are hurting rather than helping animals. This essay will discuss that zoos are hurting animals, and therefore should be banned.
Firstly, animals play an important to maintain the ecological balance in our environment. If these animals are kept in zoos then the natural habitats of these animals are lost and thus affects the whole environment. For instance, animals enjoy moving around in the jungle, hunting their pray and playing with each other. Hence, it is more apparent that animals should be allowed to live in their natural environment.
Secondly, zoos disturb the animal's natural way of living. People not only throw foods but often tease these innocent animals for their own happiness. Animals inside the zoo do not get enough food and are captured in a small space which limits their movements and this will cause them to slowly lose their hunting skills and other survival skills. For instance, those animals which are inside the zoos are often seen either sleeping or resting and do not show enough energy as compared to the animals inside the jungle or their natural habitats. Thus, it is obvious that animals do not prefer zoos.
To conclude, from the above discussion it is undoubtedly clear that animals should be left in their natural habitats instead of limiting them in zoos. Hence, it is evident that zoos are hurting animals instead of helping them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04511278195 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32992949004 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53007518797 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9238500128 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303728602024 0.242375264174 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128607206017 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494612820289 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208600863622 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352456659418 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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