Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums?
Museums are one of the most significant tourist attractions in every city. In my point of view, people enjoy visiting museums while they travel for two reasons. In the following essay, I will explain these reasons in further details.
First and foremost, people visit museums to get insight into history and cultural heritage of the new place they are visiting. Museums contain unique collections of historical artifacts which actually represent and illustrate the history of a country. For example, most of the tourists who travel to Iran visit “National Museum of Jewelry” located in Tehran and they declare that by observing priceless collection of ancient jewelry, they understand the glory of ancient monarchies. Also, visiting museums enables them to learn about Persian history, culture, folklore, costumes, traditions, and values.
Moreover, museums are intriguing places for art lovers. Both the antique art pieces held in history museums and modern artworks exhibited in contemporary art museums fascinate everyone interested in art. I myself am an art student. Last year when I was visiting Paris, I used the opportunity to visit an art museum, which gave me great inspirations for my later paintings. Not only did that museum tour help me to come up with some ideas for my thesis, I also had enjoyable time looking at famous artists’ masterpieces.
In conclusion, I believe that people go to museums because they want to gain knowledge of the culture and history of the city they are visiting. Besides, they enjoy the noble artworks which are presented for public viewing in the museums. In other words, by visiting museums, they add an intellectual element to their trip.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26838235294 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82547946983 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4865189274 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361284258557 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120814036476 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932952012935 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230601451568 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552331019163 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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