Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views.
It is argued that life in major urban areas has become much of a challenge. Although there is some truth to that statement, I think the qualities of life in cities have made it easier for residents in many ways.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people find it difficult to live in a metropolis. The first reason is high unemployment rate. In this places, there is a concentration of well-educated students from major universities having to compete against others to seek a lucrative job in the labor market, which makes residents try their best to settle in metro areas. Accommodation is another reason can be considered. The situation of insufficiently available land increases the housing price and forces citizens to try to live in small apartments, which are not required electricity and water.
Although the reasons above are justifiable, opponents still believe that living in metropolitan areas is easier than ever before. Firstly, they understand that a large amount of tax money often invested in the educational and medical system in large cities. As a result, their children would have more chances to access to new teaching methods and high-end technologies in schools as well as be intensively cared by advancements and breakthroughs of treatments in famous hospitals. Besides, large cities often call a great number of attention from foreigners, which attract millions of tourists to visit. This facilitates citizens to touch the difference of various cultures and broaden their knowledge and understanding.
In conclusion, although there are disadvantages of living in large cities, I think the advantages are more tremendous and these places are still dreamland to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, so, still, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2673992674 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09162283178 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.814782458 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174521384064 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521958823327 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574666730401 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955967795414 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00650332709994 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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