People in your area are having problem! with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provide the connection. In your letter • describe the problem» • explain how they are affecting people * • lay what the company should do to help
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you in regards to the internet connection problem we are currently facing in Madison square.
The major cause of this problem, is the disappearance of the internet connection due to network issue. For almost one week now we have not been able to surf the internet or access the internet in anyway because of no network signal. Even before the network finally fizzled out there were countless of occasion were the internet connection was really poor and can take up to ten minutes to load a page. But the data connection finally caved in last Monday and surprisingly it has not come back up till now.
Let the explain in details how this problem is distorting the lives of the people in Madison square. First of all Madison square is one of the most popular business hub in Abuja, these businesses which uses your provided internet connection are all at risk of losing out of their costumers because they have not been able to continue to run their various businesses due to this problem. Other than businesses the daily life of people in the area have been disrupted because they can not communicate via email and other social media with family and love ones outside.
One main solution to this problem, is to install more network masks or routers in the area. Another solution can be the upgrade of the internet connection system. Or alternatively maintenance on systems need to be carried out swiftly in other to avoid a repeat of such dilemma.
Thanks for your considerations.
Yours Faithfully
Jon Snow
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you in regards to the internet connection problem we are ...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...urf the internet or access the internet in anyway because of no network signal. Even befo...
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Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t has not come back up till now. Let the explain in details how this problem is distorti...
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Line 7, column 554, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...other social media with family and love ones outside. One main solution to this p...
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Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: OR_ALTERNATIVELY[1]
Message: Use simply 'Or'.
Suggestion: Or
...rade of the internet connection system. Or alternatively maintenance on systems need to be carri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, first, if, really, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84328358209 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57250615666 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3495447173 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207059163344 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724185425138 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496934432349 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104362355147 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589573649744 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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