Some of the Methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in todays society
To what extent do you agree with this view.
Advertisement have grown in popularity over the years, advert are on television, on the world wide web, in the street and even on our mobile phone. Today some of the ways in which is advertisement are been carried out are immoral and not acceptable in the society.
To begin with, the fact is we can not escape from advertisement and sometimes we really need this adverts. But in gets infuriating and irritating to see an advert in every corner we turn to, these advertisement companies are bombarding us with too much or unnecessary adverts even at the expense of invading our privacy and comfort zone. For Instance, advertisements through mobile phones, where the technological companies or network providers can send advertisements message through SMS to our phone or in some cases through calls whenever they want to without considering if we are really interested in such adverts. Thus, as a result of this it is unacceptable to the society for they to bombard us with unwanted adverts and at the same time invade our peace.
Further aspect in which i think advertisement is unethical, is due to the fact that they promote and advertise things that are hazardous to our health. Take for example, the advertisement of tobacco and alcohol have a detrimental effect on our society as this encourages people to smoke and drink excessively. Although advertising of tobacco have been banned on some across the world i think the same courtesy should be extended to alcoholic advertisements because as a result of this, there have been a increase in underage drinking. This pose a grave threat to our society and such advertisements are immoral. In addition to this, sometimes advertising of the latest toys and gadgets can put massive pressure on young children as well as parents. This young children would be so desperate to lay their hands on this latest cool gadgets and toys which may lure them in committing unspeakable acts like stealing, and sometimes parents are forced to spend what they can not afford.
To conclude, although advertisement is a nice marketing skill. The method it is been carried out these days can encourage unhealthy lifestyle as well as the invasion of personal space in our society which i think is uncalled for and unsocial for our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96605744125 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91516435749 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511749347258 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3908522069 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3571428571 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183220847345 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072756249875 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281299040338 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105810597664 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383551149164 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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