You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Patel,
I am John Mill, a banker, who has rented Mr Bikerman’s House situated beside your house. I am residing here from the last month. The reason for writing this letter is letting you know that a party is going to be arranged in my home on the eve of my marriage. It will be a great honor for me, if come and join in this party with your family members. And as a responsible neighbor, though I know this program will create some noises which may be disturbing for you. I apologize in for that in advance and allow me to share some of the party plans.
My Friends and their family members will be invited as a guest and they will come around 6pm and stay till midnight. We will cook various items in the garden area and there will be a music system there. After having dinner, we are planning to arrange a DJ party, which will take place in my living room not in the open place. The reason for arranging it as an indoor program is that it will be very noisy and two big sound boxes will be there. I have thought about the kids zone where the young people can enjoy their time.
No more today. If you have any suggestion feel free to share with me.
Best wishes
John Mill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Patel, I am John Mill, a banker, who has rented...
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Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r that in advance and allow me to share some of the party plans. My Friends and their fami...
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Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... can enjoy their time. No more today. If you have any suggestion feel free to sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11161161005 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621739130435 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7279713237 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174484601956 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515856730732 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539473583917 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10982799515 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875593366597 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.