Dear sir/Madam,
I am a resident of the South Avenue society and I am writing this letter with regards to the planning of closing the sport and leisure center in our community. I believe, it would be really inappropriate to implement this notion.
I am residing in this society since thirteen years with my family which comprises of my parents and two younger brothers. This center is an vital part of our lives as it is the only place where we all can play our favorite sports. Like me and my brothers love badminton and we are in the state team, so, we use this place to practice badminton every day religiously. Also, my parents like to swim there to maintain good health.
In addition, most of the elderly people in our community gather here in the evening to take part in the several activities conducted by the leisure center such as chess and carom competition. Indeed, it is the only place where these people hang out and relax.
If the center will be shut down then it may have several adverse effects on the local residents such as there will be no space left for the children and young people to play. Plus, senior citizens will have negative impact on their health because due to this place they get to meet people and enjoy which helps them to cope up with the old age problems.
Hence, I urge you to reconsider your decision as it might cause many difficulties for the society people.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ppropriate to implement this notion. I am residing in this society since thirt...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...nce thirteen years with my family which comprises of my parents and two younger brothers. Th...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nd two younger brothers. This center is an vital part of our lives as it is the on...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the state team, so, we use this place to practice badminton every day religiou...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, really, so, then, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61478599222 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40961299073 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.958316942 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8333333333 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144098582291 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512636378012 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525051800761 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723143955306 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304889672622 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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