Dear Mr. Jammwal,
I am a part-time employee in your company which I joined a week ago. I am writing this letter to you in order to bring to your notice some irregularities that are going on in the workplace and hope to receive your timely intervention for their resolution.
I would like to share with you that I am a first-year university student and have joined your company in a part-time job to make ends meet. As such I have a very tight schedule. The problem that I am facing is that when my shift ends, the relieving employees generally do not come on time and are usually quite late. As I cannot just leave the workplace unattended, I have to wait for my reliever for mostly well over half-an-hour. I am afraid this pattern is detrimental to my daily routine due to which I have already faced problems in my university classes. I regret to inform you that if things go on like this, I may have to quit my job.
Therefore, I humbly request you to take action so that punctuality is strictly observed in your company as it is high-time that employees like me who are always on time do not suffer at the hands of those who are not serious in this regard.
Hoping for a quick redressal of my issue. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Jingo Ba.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y intervention for their resolution. I would like to share with you that I am ...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y in a part-time job to make ends meet. As such I have a very tight schedule. The ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43103448276 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64067639427 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573275862069 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9715847922 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4545454545 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218488582472 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843366012181 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643775342499 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12994112321 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369215753073 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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