Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Human being has encountered lots of challenges from the reidency periods. The more flourished the society get, the harder it is to live. It's given that people in the recent ages live much harder compared to previous generations. Many are of the idea to live in the moment;They accentuate on the essence of having fun in youth. Although I agree that it's essential to have fun, I assume that in such an exotic and most of the time cruel world, it's irrational to live without any general predicted plan or organization. There are lots of clues which makes it inevitable, however, the complexity of one society is the most concerning. People require organization of life style in many ways, most essential of which are presented below:
First and for the most, there's a famous Persian saying that claims no one has lived twice; it addresses the importance of having a schedule. Each individual has only one opportunity for living, thus it's better to use it in a way that prevents any regret at the end of life. Suppose a successful professor who has used every single chance to progress, compared to an addicted person whose life fills with useless moments.
Furthurmore, there are some avenues which don't have any U-turn, or in case of being so lucky, has it in a far distance away. In other words, some decisions apears to be tough to compensate; however it can not stop the inevitable passing of life. Some choices can't be fixed easily, unless by expensing extra energy and time on that. It will hurt to finally get to know that a person is at the same point he/s was few years ago again, which by having a plan it wouldn't has happened at all.
Last but not least, it feels like confidence to have a plan every now and then . It will be a relief to always know or predict what to do next, as well as having something as a backup plan which makes up improve the quality of our lives. People with confidence will attract others whether in career or personal life, and it not only reinforce the self confidence but also leads to further achievments in life.
To make a long stroy short, having an approximate plan will not only prevent prospective regret, but also it will help to move merely forward. Moreover, the quality of life and the amount of success will increase dramatically which will end to a happier life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...nerations. Many are of the idea to live in the moment;They accentuate on the essence of havin...
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...rthurmore, there are some avenues which dont have any U-turn, or in case of being so...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nevitable passing of life. Some choices cant be fixed easily, unless by expensing ex...
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...rs ago again, which by having a plan it wouldnt has happened at all. Last but not le...
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...a plan it wouldnt has happened at all. Last but not least, it feels like confid...
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...idence to have a plan every now and then . It will be a relief to always know or p...
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... leads to further achievments in life. To make a long stroy short, having an ap...
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...ally which will end to a happier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6038647343 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5306757853 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3373710219 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199651869539 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564278150765 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372098968464 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106413236234 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272851171796 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.