lie
The Truth Behind Lying illustrated four main reasons why people lie in daily life. To me, lying has two sides: bad and good which depend on detail cases. Firstly, I believe that “white lie” is an example of good side of lying. “White lie” means lie that are not considered serious. For example, my mother is always worried about her weight, so she don’t want to eat anymore. I said, “ You’re beautiful, not fat and you should be confident about your appearance.” . Althought she looks pretty heavy. These lies like that can make people heard feel relaxed and happy. Another reason why I believe that it is okay to lie is to save someone’s life. When I was kid and I usually had to be home alone, my parents taught me do not open the door in any case, except emergency. If strange people asked me to open the door, I would say, “I don’t have the key, and my parents are coming.” However, more and more people lie in bad purposes. They do not want to stuck with situation in which they are. For instance, my friend had a class at 6.45 a.m but she’s too lazy to get up on time. Then, she called me and told me that she was sick and asked me request her absence from the teacher. Moreover, lying is used to decrease or cancel mistakes which people made. I used to experience that a classmate was cheating. Unfortunately, the teacher came and stood beside her. Then, she tried to explain that she had forgot to put the book inside her backpack instead of admitting her fault. Overall, the lies are more popular in the world for many reasons. However, every lies will be exposed whenever it could be; then, the liars will lost people’s trust. So, make sure you think about the situation before deciding to say something is not true.
- the number of visitors to England 11
- the world population 84
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government.Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Japanese average monthly salary 67
- the percentage of tourists to England 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e confident about your appearance.' . Althought she looks pretty heavy. These...
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Line 2, column 1462, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...Then, she tried to explain that she had forgot to put the book inside her backpack ins...
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Line 2, column 1682, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...never it could be; then, the liars will lost people's trust. So, make sure you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57130917227 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614420062696 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6705263865 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4285714286 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1904761905 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315168634994 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120998513633 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143294113576 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315168634994 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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