tpo12- independent
Science has broad range. Trying to learn many academic subjects, will be very difficult, more like it could be impractical to learn a wide range of academic subjects.
But in this new mileniuum that we are living in, many new interdiciplinary majors are now being thought in universities, like Engineering Science, Cognitive Science, Bioengineering. Which in order for one person to truely master his or her major and make truely valuebale contribution to the scientific community, he or she has to become expert in more than a few academic subjects. For example, in Engineering Science, students have to have a good knowledge of mathematics, physics and also computational techniques that are mostly thought to computer science students.
But generally speaking, excluding the above example from our conversation, personally, I have to say specializing in a specific subject is more advantagous for a person than have basic understanding of wide veriety of subjects. Todays economy and needs experts in their field and even for experts, it is a very though competition. One person has to be very good at his job in order to have job security and have a satisfying life, because there are a lot of people that can do the same thing and the companies do not hesitate to replace not one hundred percent efficient employees.
I believe, in order for one to be great, his or her science has to like a dot on a page. That is actually a saying that I read by a iconic religious figure in Islam, Imam Ali. In his opinion true knowledge is like a dot, maybe because humans do not have the capacity to learn about everything in their limited lifetime.
The historic and religious aspect aside, it also makes sense to become specialized in a subject first before trying other things. Any specialization is important for a person's resume and that s why in high schools it is emphasized to students to choose their carriers with great care, because they will not have enough time in their life to come back and do another thing.
- The fire in Yellowstone park, Good or bad? 81
- Dinosaurs as endotherm animals 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Successful people try new things and risks rather than doing what they already know how to do well.use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It's better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. 71
- tpo-11-integrated 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hat is actually a saying that I read by a iconic religious figure in Islam, Imam ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, another thing, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86416184971 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91177046321 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546242774566 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4697183717 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.461538462 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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