Many of the cities in the world are suffering from traffic and pollution issues. Some people say that public transport in the best solution and great way to travel especially in urban areas also metro is the most convenient way to move around the city. I completely agree with this view point.
According to the recent studies conducted by the 'Time Magazine', around 1-2 hours of people's productive time is being jeopardised when they stuck on city traffic daily. If these take study in terms an entire city, a staggering figure may arise, this is not a good for country's economy. Furthermore, a whooping number of people lost their life in motor accidents in city areas because of the reckless driving and carelessness to avoid being stuck in traffic. On top of that, motor vehicles are the primary pollutants in the city, these vehicles are emitting tons of carbon dioxide in to the atmosphere and making people people difficult to breath.
Public transportation is the best solution to the all the above issues. Government should encourage people to use public vehicles more than private one's. In addition, public transport offers more comfort and relaxation as compared to self driving, people can arrive at their destination without thinking much about traffic and driving problems. Likewise, we can a huge pile of money, if we public facilities for travel because the travel fares are cheap as compared to our own car's travel cost. Similarly it offers more security to woman, children and old age people, it is true that they are always vulnerable when they travel alone. To add, the new mode of public transportation, metro's are gaining huge popularity among city dwellers as they reach timely and cheap service its commuters.
To recapitulate, nowadays public mode transportation is the most convenient way of roaming around the city and metropolitan areas. it offers huge advantages over private vehicles both in economic and environmental terms
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...both in economic and environmental terms
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, well, in addition, it is true, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09627329193 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70603126803 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6155918763 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223556830734 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747609088376 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114575459192 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164872787798 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102122345362 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.