TPO 46
The article states that there are several advantages of using electronic recording devices in hospitals and provides three reasons of support. The professor opposes this claim and rejects all the reading reasons one by one.
First, the text claims that it is cost reduction and some kind of saving money when hospitals use electronic facilities since it reduces paper consumption. On the contrary, the professor states that the doctors who use electronic devices keep using paper records because it has staff's sings, and it is more legal and reliable.
Second, the article states that using electronic recorders will result in a reduction of errors by eliminating non-organized paper records. In contrast, the professor mentions that staffs that put doctor's order into the electronic devices may make mistake because of poor handwriting or misunderstanding.
Third, according to reading electronic recorders can gather large amounts of data easily be accessible for nurses. However, professor illustrates that privacy law does not allow hospital staffs to have access to patients data, also she says that staffs need to pas a complicated process to get the information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, may, second, so, third, in contrast, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 182.0 270.72406181 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48901098901 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8440157016 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1980326977 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.875 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328059989468 0.272083759551 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149692297022 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882953885794 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199541737355 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410602248961 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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