You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention some issue with the local restaurant in my neighborhood.
I am a resident of Main Road, Charles stone. I have been living here since 5 years ago and during this course there have been a few restaurants in my neighborhood with high quality services. In order to celebrate the national holiday with my family we went to one of these restaurants which are in my vicinity which name is “Olive Garden”. Not only the quality and quantity of the meals were great, but also the staff and the manager were so friendly, attentive and studious people. During our stay nothing was too much to ask and we felt as we were at home. The food that we ordered includes Pasta, Pizza and some seasonal salad with a delicious souse on the top.
I would suggest you to publish an article with regard to this local restaurant. Although it is a cozy restaurant, it is beautifully furnished with classic tables and chairs as well as luxurious curtains. Furthermore, the price was reasonable and all the dishes were cooked with fresh vegetables and the ingredients were nutritious.
I look forward to reading your article in the local Newspaper as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a resident of Main Road, Charles stone. I have been living here since 5 years ago...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as to, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85648148148 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7578878956 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7049917826 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4166666667 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165080339512 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543074008192 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452382809533 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10706639134 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347761700631 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.