The given graph and table illustrate the average monthly degree and the total hours of daylight in three different cities included New York, London and Sydney during a year.
It could be seen from the graph that London and NewYork experienced the familiar platform of temperatures with the warmest time from July to August.In contrast, Sydney witnessed a different pattern of degree with the coldest point stood at July and became warmer until the end of year.
NewYork city began with the temperatures around 5° in January and reached its peak at approximately 30° in July while this figure in London followed the familiar pattern with the degree increased gradually around 9° to roughly 24°. Sydney began the year with warm weather at about 25° and this data declined continuously to the coldest point in July at about 15°. In the last 6 month, there was a slightly increase in the temperatures of Sydney from roughly 15° to exact 25° which contrast with the trend of degree in NewYork and London, the temperatures decreased from 30° to around 5° and roughly 25° to 10° respectively.
As far as the hour of sunshine concerned, London occupies the smallest hours about 1180 while NewYork has the highest hours at 2535 which a little bit higher compared with 2473 daylight hours of Sydney
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...th the warmest time from July to August.In contrast, Sydney witnessed a different ...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...out 15°. In the last 6 month, there was a slightly increase in the temperatures of Sydney from roug...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...k has the highest hours at 2535 which a little bit higher compared with 2473 daylight hour...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pared with 2473 daylight hours of Sydney
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92670157068 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5453642994 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5402652216 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.2 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164207036175 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940973978027 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387959863825 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123614541675 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248953318622 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.2329268293 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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