Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have
time for their personal life. Discuss. WORK LIFE BALANCE
Long office hours are the norm these days.Employees are forced to work harder and harder.On the negative side,instead of increasing, it decreases the productivity.This essay will discuss the work-life balance and provide reasons for the support.
There is much more competition in the market as was never before.Spending long hours in the office is of no one's benefit.Covering long distances to reach to the office is neither helpful when a person reaches office after braving the heavy traffic, working long hours in the office and then reaching home, he is left with very less energy to invest in the home tasks. With the passage of the time the level of depression and frustration is increased in the employee. It takes him a long time to complete the same task which he was able to perform with ease earlier.
The work-life balance is essential in order to lead a successful life. Along with the office hours, it is one's responsibility to take care of his children and provide them with the utmost guidance as this is the time for the learning and getting mature. If the husband and wife are not able to give time to each other, this can produce serious consequences to the extent of separation.
To wrap up and in the view of the above discussion, it is hoped that the companies arrange their office timings in such manner that the employees have a good time to serve for their family and keep maintain the work-life balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78313253012 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80168195617 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558232931727 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.2054182974 50.4703680194 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.875 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.125 20.9669160288 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264977218875 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118355606362 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969607791699 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17000594016 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550735958427 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.94827586207 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.5123152709 266% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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