"Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Recently, the phenomenon of vegetarianism and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that being vegetarian is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am declined to believe that eating vegetables can be a plus, and I will analyze throughout this essay.
From a healthcare standpoint, vegetarianism can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that being healthy, as well as well-being, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered healthy lifestyle. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both mental and physical health apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of nutrition knowledge, eating vegetables might increase the consequences of healthy lifestyle culture. Moreover, fundamental aspects of nutritional culture relate to this reality that the demerits of animal’s rights pertain to consuming their meat. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of consuming animal’s meat is correlated negatively with diverse illnesses. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of animals ‘lives.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of being vegetarian far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of vegetarianism prove the significance of whole species ‘rights in this world, but also pinpoint disease implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...horoughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88429752066 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40917856136 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8882677531 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183215915629 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565374684602 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354139453416 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942131177808 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306492390725 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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