The first chart below shows the results of a survey with sample the cross section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travel for the period 1994 to 1998. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period
Write a report for a University lecturer describing and formation shown below.
The tables below illustrate information regarding the results of a survey involving hundred thousands people for UK residents visiting abroad for different purposes and destination by main reason in 1994 to 1998 overall it can be seen that main purpose was for holiday and western Europe was most popular destination.
To begin with, for holidays about 15000 UK citizens went abroad in 1994 out of 22000. About 3000 went for business approximately 2700 to visit friends and relatives, while people visiting for other reasons constituted almost 1000. In 1995 residents who went for holiday decrease a little and, was under 15000 whereas, other categories remained similar. In 1996 out of 24000 about 18000 went for holidays, while people who went for business, visit to friends and other reasons remains same. In 1997 citizens who left for holidays increase to 19000 with total figure went up to 27000, similarly in 1998 holiday makers rose to 2 20000, while for other reasons went down below 1000.
Residents who visited Western Europe in 1994 were 19000 which fell slightly below 19000 in 1995 after that, the number increased with each successive Year, and in 1998, 24500 people visited Western Europe. North America was least popular destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...rding the results of a survey involving hundred thousands people for UK residents visit...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...friends and other reasons remains same. In 1997 citizens who left for holidays inc...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the least'.
Suggestion: was the least
...e visited Western Europe. North America was least popular destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, similarly, so, whereas, while, as for, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18719211823 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43088350058 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0160239951 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.625 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135300232911 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659323522711 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409817825008 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100367090733 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308232490328 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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