Nowadays age discrimination in any company has become a common trend. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s corporate world is an increased bias in favour of youth, thanks to their young age, punctuality and adaptability to modern working environment. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the latter outdo the former.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that no matter how energetic and enthusiastic young employees are, they have insufficient knowledge and exposure about their work. Not only can young employees often find it hard to take decision based on their limited expertise unlike their senior counterparts, but the company can also suffer astronomically in the long run by having these vulnerable and whimsical youth in place of senior employees who possess a wealth of knowledge and experience in their long-haul career. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on company’s growth.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that training young employees will cost employers a significant amount of money, time and other resources, thus affecting the growth of company’s revenue. Besides, if modern technology is what senior employees are lagged behind in, they can easily overcome this shortcoming by taking relevant training in their respective fields. Hence, it is apparent why many are against discriminating employees on the basis of their age.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the demerits of age discrimination, be it in organisations or companies are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
... latter outdo the former. There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2984496124 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05352812536 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3457173992 50.4703680194 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.7 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780131023085 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353781187246 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306329978605 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555505927884 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186416552032 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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