Mass media like TV, newspaper, and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion? you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, the influence of media has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether mass media shape the society or not?”. It is a widely held view that broadcasting devices are highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that media such as TV, newspaper, and the Internet play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express some reasons. First and foremost is that people’s public awareness will be raised in terms of socio-economic, technology, medical fields, and keeping up with the latest news, Secondly, it can be argued that the juveniles will be able to promote their knowledge by searching the Internet and watching documentary programs. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that media form people’s culture, character, and attitudes. A group of scientists, working at a prestigious university conducted that mass media consist of an extensive range of beneficial educational programs.
However, there is no doubt that constant use of mass media provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that some violent and unpleasant programs in TV and the Internet lead to damaging consequences to the society. Moreover, it is quite clear that watching TV or reading newspapers that comprising flashy advertisement tempt people to purchase the products without knowing them.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that some informed decision must be taken into consideration to take a balance between widespread uses of mass media. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...days, the influence of media has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3537414966 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08410947003 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5545967999 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110602983152 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403694625187 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040180379501 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650542267959 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226437624313 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.