Are the cars damaging the environment? Should the number of cars be restricted to one for one family? Give your views and support your views with appropriate examples.
Nowadays, restricting more than one car in each family has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “are the cars damaging the environment or not?”. It is a widely held view that limiting the number of the car in each family is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the confining the number of cars in each family plays a vital role in the fast-changing society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is the traffic congestion that leads to air pollution as well as a wide variety of diseases, such as lung cancer or contamination of ecosystem. Secondly, lack of park space that proceeds from being more than one car in each family can be the other problem. In addition to this information, it should be mention that India is struggling with more than a car in each family.
However, there is no doubt that an informed decision should be considered to address being more that car in each family. One possible approach is producing convenient public transport system and subsequently, encourage people to provide just one car for the whole family. The alternative solution would be holding educational sessions to raise the public awareness about the damaging the environment.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the restriction of cars to one in every family must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ition to this information, it should be mention that India is struggling with more than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92252878018 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4196223057 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36225245668 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123538279458 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777427601226 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207146224316 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516307937659 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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