These days, there is an ongoing debate going on that whether television is a medium to spread news or it’s just a companion. It is irrefutable fact that in tech-savvy era, it is one of the most important invention and discovery. It is a great source of spreading news and awareness among people. I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of arguments in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, it can seen that TV has now become a part of everyone’s life such that our day start and end with this. It can also be argued that it has myriad shows which increases awareness among people. For instance, there are bunch of news channels and many knowledge shows which gives us insight about the world. Therefore, it can be argued that It is an essential medium to amplify awareness between people.
Moreover, It is also very convenient that people can watch all information while sitting at home. However, some people have a point that it is more like a companion or partner for alone people as once can get entertained from it .But this point does seem right to much extent as it is only a source of news and awareness unlike a companion. Hence, TV is imperative source of spreading awareness in the world.
In a nutshell , this essay argued about both arguments and it is evident that TV is a much like a medium for entertainment more than just a companion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65182186235 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69470409338 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1921822148 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22108545269 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740539169359 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647557477343 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131256955179 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176866766079 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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