Recently, the phenomenon of becoming TV as a vital need in life, and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that TV is highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both damaging and negative by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that TV programs can be a plus, and I will analyze them throughout this
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From experts standpoint, Tv programs can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that announcing, as well as TV news, are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered there are many TV news channels that inform the recent events, scientific research, new technologies and etc from around the world.
Within the realm of knowledge and entertainment, TV programs might increase the positive consequences of enhancing the level of the people's public knowledge. Moreover, fundamental aspects of entertainment programs related to this fact that the demerits of this programs pertain to the rate of watching them against the scientific programs. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that there is a great interest in people to watch the programs related to different sciences and knowledge.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of Television far of outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38912133891 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15351293422 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1918358845 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.111111111 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101328187936 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397482538432 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339300588741 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526784960369 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406765312385 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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