You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Dear Sir Peter,
I am writing to you about my wwatch that I forgot at my room, no 702, in the hotel which is being managed by you.
As you know, I and my family had stayed there for 5 days before we moved to the next destination in our vacation. I felt so glad about my trip and things we are going to do that i left my watch behind, at your hotel.
At the time I realized that, I also arrived in Ha Noi, that last place in my trip. So, I could not come back to your hotel right after that.
In addition, my watch is black colour with brown leather and automatic type. It's case diameter is around 41 mm. And i guess that maybe it's on the table next to the bed, because taking off the watch then putting it on the table nearly are the first things i do when i am back home (or room in hotel).
So, please find and keep it until I come back to your hotel in my business trip next ten days, or you can send me by post. I will be happy to pay the post office fee.
Thank you and best regards,
Your sincerely,
Cuong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...trip and things we are going to do that i left my watch behind, at your hotel. A...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Its case diameter is around 41 mm. And i guess that maybe its on the table next ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n the table nearly are the first things i do when i am back home or room in hotel...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e nearly are the first things i do when i am back home or room in hotel. So, p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, then, i guess, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 3.93301435407 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.87601303876 2.54303337028 74% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2136724614 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7272727273 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151548183794 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621997693462 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621608128901 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861283492751 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429896439886 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 70.7449484536 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.51 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.64 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 41.2886597938 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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